Comments on: Friday Snippet: Pine http://blog.jtimothyking.com/2007/10/12/friday-snippet-pine Stories of a Self-published, Entrepreneurial Fiction Author (and Software Guy) Fri, 21 Nov 2008 05:27:39 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.3.1 By: J. Timothy King http://blog.jtimothyking.com/2007/10/12/friday-snippet-pine#comment-59593 J. Timothy King Sat, 13 Oct 2007 13:08:06 +0000 http://blog.jtimothyking.com/2007/10/12/friday-snippet-pine#comment-59593 Thanks for your kind words, Joely, Gabriele, Cheryl, and Meryl. -TimK Thanks for your kind words, Joely, Gabriele, Cheryl, and Meryl.

-TimK

]]> By: MerylF http://blog.jtimothyking.com/2007/10/12/friday-snippet-pine#comment-59579 MerylF Sat, 13 Oct 2007 06:12:30 +0000 http://blog.jtimothyking.com/2007/10/12/friday-snippet-pine#comment-59579 A sweet little vignette. A sweet little vignette.

]]> By: cherylp http://blog.jtimothyking.com/2007/10/12/friday-snippet-pine#comment-59570 cherylp Sat, 13 Oct 2007 04:19:27 +0000 http://blog.jtimothyking.com/2007/10/12/friday-snippet-pine#comment-59570 "Little gabled alcoves jutted into the world" I really liked this line. I think you have some nice turns of phrase in this piece. Plus, you captured the sad, slightly panicky feeling when something major is about to change during childhood. Good job! “Little gabled alcoves jutted into the world”
I really liked this line. I think you have some nice turns of phrase in this piece. Plus, you captured the sad, slightly panicky feeling when something major is about to change during childhood. Good job!

]]> By: Gabriele http://blog.jtimothyking.com/2007/10/12/friday-snippet-pine#comment-59506 Gabriele Fri, 12 Oct 2007 14:29:30 +0000 http://blog.jtimothyking.com/2007/10/12/friday-snippet-pine#comment-59506 Aw, the emotional fumbling of teenage love. :) You captured that well. Aw, the emotional fumbling of teenage love. :) You captured that well.

]]> By: Joely http://blog.jtimothyking.com/2007/10/12/friday-snippet-pine#comment-59505 Joely Fri, 12 Oct 2007 14:09:31 +0000 http://blog.jtimothyking.com/2007/10/12/friday-snippet-pine#comment-59505 I love getting inspiration from unexpected places! I love getting inspiration from unexpected places!

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